Brooklyn

I think next week I will be going to New York.  I love New York.  I haven't been in a few years.  I am going with my friends Jade and Brittany to see Jade's mom and sister.  I'm pretty sure I will be taking advantage of this opportunity for a weekend get away.  Well, I'll be missing everyone in class Friday and  Monday next week!

I really don't like peer editing.  I don't feel like it is effective.  Some people don't take criticism very well.  But I think we have a very supportive class.  Keep up the good work everyone ! :)

Crime/Punishment

     I have changed my topic for this crime and punishment paper a good five times.  I think I have settled on immigration.  I actually have people in my family fighting for immigration laws to be changed and things like that.  Honestly, I don't really understand it all.  I'm not very good at all the government stuff.
     The reason ended up choosing it though, is because it was the topic that I could get the farthest with.  I was very confused on how the essay we are supposed to be completing was going to be argumentative, persuasive, AND a research paper.  Until I realized that in order to argue something, you should probably research what you are arguing to have facts to back yourself up.  On top of that to have a successful argument you should probably be somewhat persuasive.  So I guess they all go hand in hand.

Everyone else already has multiple posts..so I'm back again.  Except I forgot what I was going to post about.  I'll probably try this again after the Packers are done whooping some 49er ass.

     So, I'm a little late on posting.  I forgot my password and then sent the forgot password thing to the wrong email address. Anyways, I'm Chelsey and I hope sometime in this semester I get the hang of this blog thing.  If I say things that you don't agree with on your blog, especially if they're totally out of the water, it's probably because I don't even agree with what I write on your blog.  I more than likely just commented on whatever you wrote because I have to for my wonderful English class.   Oh, and let me just mention before I go that I'm not too thrilled about having to write fifteen hundred word papers...three of them.